DEVELOPMENTAL EDITING

As I conduct a developmental edit, I'll consider the following:

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• Is the novel's ​structure well-paced, with the inciting incident, rising action, climax, etc., where the reader would expect them to be?

• Is the novel structured correctly for the genre and target market?

• Does the novel's pace remain steady throughout, or does it drag in the middle?

• Are the characters realistic and three dimensional? Do they each have their own clear, unique voice? Are their motives clear? Is their characterization consistent? Do their choices and actions match their characterization?

• Do the main themes and messages come across the way you intended? Are they clear to the reader?

• Are the themes and message underscored by the character's journey in a way that makes sense?

• Do the subplots satisfactorily contribute to the main plot? Are there too many subplots? Not enough?

• Is there a good balance of dialogue, action, and inner monologue?

• Does every chapter, scene, or beat move the plot forward or help the reader better understand the characters?​

• Is there enough tension and emotional weight throughout the story?

• Does the novel have the typical elements of the genre that readers expect?

• Are there any scenes that could be cut to strengthen the plot?

GENRE SPECIALIZATIONS

I specialize in the following genres for middle grade and young adult audiences:

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• mystery / thriller

• spooky / horror 

• coming-of-age fiction 

• historical fiction

• narrative/creative nonfiction

• dystopian

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If you aren't sure what genre your novel falls within, please don't hesitate to reach out. Describe the premise of your story, and I will give you my honest opinion on whether or not I am the right editor for the job!